Proposal revision (Nancy&Ruby)

[Maria Nancy flies to the savage place]

Maria Nancy:

Hi, all the people listen to me, the greatest God came to my dream and tell me that you are trapped in this savaged island. So, he sent me to save you from this place.

Jack:

Who are you?

Maria Nancy:

I’m Maria Nancy, a nun in the Da Vinci Church. Jack! Is that you?

Jack:

Yes, I’m Jack, but why do you know my name?

Maria Nancy:

I’m Ralph! You don’t know me? Oh! Of course, you don’t know me. I’m a woman now.

Jack:

You’re Ralph! Oh my god! But how? No, no no no how could it be? Why did you change your gender?

Maria Nancy:

You don’t remember how you treated me? You did so many terrible things and you even try to kill me.

Jack:

Shut up! Ralph!

Maria Nancy:

I cannot let them stay in this horrible place. All of you, let me reveal my horrible childhood to you. Jack and I were marooned on this island ten years ago. Jack loved fighting and hunting, but I tended to use the civilized way, so he hated me and tried to kill me. He even sent two dragons to attack me. Luckily, I escaped and was saved by the British Navy.

Jack: I can’t believe you were rescued and still alive. Lucky you huh?

Maria Nancy:

Yeah! Without their help, I had died in your hand. They brought me back to the civilized place. After I gained my consciousness, I discovered that I became a girl without the hoarse voices. The doctor said to me, “two parts of your body were injured seriously, your brain and private part. In order to save you, I removed your sex organ. For your brain, the damage of your brain cannot fully recover after the operation.” See what you have done to me in this savage place. That’s why I hate this place so much. This is not a place for human to live. Quick! All of you! Let’s fly away from this dangerous place and back to the civilized place, which is peaceful and harmonious.

Jack: Wait a second. How dare you to take them away! They didn’t finish my challenge, so they need to stay here. That’s the rule.

Maria Nancy:

No, they belong to the civilized place.

Jack:

Since I am in a good mood today, why not play the paper scissor stone. If you win, I’ll let them go, but if I win, three of them and you!! Need to stay forever.

Nancy:

Ok~paper scissor stone!

Jack:

Damn! I didn’t win.

Maria Nancy:

Ha ha! Now! You can go back to the civilized place with me. First, you can click the option world on the top of the screen. And then go to the world-map. In the world-map, there is a space for you to type the location, right? So, our location is  Motru...M-O-T-R-U and next to the word location, there are three blanks for you to type the number of the location. First, you need type 189. The second is 37. And the third one is 39. And then you can close it.

After you close it, you can see a red array or a red light which derives from the divine realm.

Now, follow me to go back to our civilized place. 

[Everybody arrived at the church]

Maria Nancy:

Everybody's here? Oh, thanks God's goodness. Your birth brings us all fortunate things.

[Task 1: God's Birth]

[Playing the Christmas bell song]

Maria Nancy:

Hi, everyone, welcome to Da Vinci Church. Let me introduce myself formally to you. I was Ralph before, but after the disastrous experience, I change my gender, so now you can just call me Maria Nancy. I tended to love the civilized way of living because my great grand-mother’s sister is Mary, the mother of Jesus. In order to know more about my ancestors’ goodness, I join this church. Recently, I have heard some news that you don’t satisfy your real life, so you want to get away from the depressing condition, actually I really want to invite you to our church because our mission here is to bring people to the Saviour. Have you hear of the song called Santa Claus is coming to town?

This song have cleaned my soul and brought me close to the God, but now my brain is damaged, so I have a bad memory to remember the lyrics. Could you help me to complete the lyrics? Thank you~

[during the activity]

Ok, [name] could you sing the first paragraph for us? [name] could you sing the second paragraph for us? [name] could you sing the third paragraph for us? Let’s sing the last paragraph together!

○   (complete)

Thank you for bringing back my lovely memory about this song. In order to express my gratitude, I'll teach you another Christmas song called We wish you a Merry Christmas. I’ll sing one sentence of the lyrics first. And you sing the sentence together again.

[lyrics]

We wish you a Merry Christmas;
We wish you a Merry Christmas;
We wish you a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year. 

[Suddenly Bible-bashing Andri rushes to the party]

Bible-bashing Andri:

“Oh! Maria, I’m late. I’m so sorry. I am really interested in the Bible recently. However, I cannot understand the whole texts of the Bible. There are some odd words there>< Could you help me?” 

Maria Nancy:

“I’m not sure I could help you because I have a bad memory now. I cannot remember all of the words clearly. Oh!!These newcomers of our church are really smart. Maybe you can ask them.”→Second activity

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Maria Nancy:

Is it difficult for you too? Maybe you can help me to remember another song about Christmas.
→Suddenly Bible-bashing Andri arrive at the church, “Hi, Maria, what are you doing? Busy?” 

Maria Nancy:

“Yes, I cannot remember the lyrics of Santa Claus is coming to Town," but the  newcomers had helped me to think another song about Christmas!! Do you want to sing with us?

Bible-bashing Andri:

“Sorry, I’d better go home and get some sleep.

Maria Nancy:

“Why?” 

Bible-bashing Andri:

“Because recently I am really interested in the Holy Bible, so spent a lot of time reading it. However, there are some odd words in it and I cannot figure them out. Could you help me Maria?” 

Maria Nancy:

“Sorry, I have bad memory now, so I don’t have the ability to help you. Maybe they can help you. They are the newcomers here.” →second activity